The day was done, a lowering sun,
It lit the sky, a boat sailed by,
The shadows long, Caribbean song.
The air was fresh, a sweet caress,
In Awe they stood, and looked out west
The view so good, they all felt blessed.
The day was done, a lowering sun,
It lit the sky, a boat sailed by,
The shadows long, Caribbean song.
The air was fresh, a sweet caress,
In Awe they stood, and looked out west
The view so good, they all felt blessed.
Nice poem and a nice use of the word “Awe”.
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Thanks. Just starting to experiment with poetry. Nice to have feedback.
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Is it your starting? It sounds matured. Carry on.
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That was my second poem.
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A beautiful poem dancing with the energy of the image :o)
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Thanks for your support.
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You are very welcome :o)
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Beautiful you have a skill for this rhyming x
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Thank you. I am enjoying myself. You bring out the best in me.
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Aww thank you x
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